Film Trailer First Draft

Here is the first draft of my film trailer for a film named "Tempest". In this trailer it explains the basic synopsis of the film and introduce the protagonist, seeing as it is a teaser trailer it doesn't give that much away of the plot, just a set up. As for the trailer itself, sadly I was not able to film all I wanted as we lost one of our major props and couldn't film the scene we wanted, so I had to improvise parts of it. I also see a lot of improvments that need to be made; particularly with the sound design, which I dislike and will probably need to redo from scratch.